Lata 90-te maszkor (Housekeeper) [5/9/2012]

[Housekeeper]

beep boop

Song Name: Lata 90-te maszkor
Artist: SD-501
Permission: CC, dex.ae

hard: http://thirdstyle.com/stepcloud/play/2072?wmode=direct
medium: http://thirdstyle.com/stepcloud/play/2071?wmode=direct
easy: http://thirdstyle.com/stepcloud/play/2070?wmode=direct
beginner: http://thirdstyle.com/stepcloud/play/2069?wmode=direct

[Saphira]

Please put up the sm for me

[Housekeeper]

WTF I PUT IT UP THERE WHEN I POSTED THE THREAD SJSJSSOFOKKVKCNFNDHSJSISK

dunno how that happened lol, will upload in a few

[Saphira]

Haha, thanks ^_^

[Housekeeper]

alrighty, should be good to go now

[Saphira]

(T) Technique - sim author's skills in pattern manipulation
(S) Sync - offset, BPM shifts, no misrhythms (obvious errors)
(I) Interpretation/Expression - creativity and imagination in translating the music, evoking meaningfulness in the file
(E) Engagement - fun, replayable and shows no signs of dragging the player along
(F) Flow - matching scales/chord progression, proper structure to the file, good transitions


KEY:

T/S/I/E/F/(A) = Technique/Sync/Interpretation & Expression/Engagement/Flow/(Additional deductions/additions)
optional notes and not required changes
Serious errors.
Additional deductions.
Minimum acceptance: 12/15

Hard: 3/3/3/3/3/(0) [15/15]

Overall really solid chart, I didn't notice any glaring mistakes, the chart flows pretty nicely and the freeze accents are done well.

Medium: 3/3/3/3/3/(0) [15/15]

Also very nicely done, a few of the run patters were a little awkward to me, but overall very nicely done.

Easy: 3/3/3/3/3/(0) [15/15]

I really enjoyed this easy chart, it was super fun to play. I noticed some really nice relevance throughout as well.

Beginner: 3/3/3/3/3/(0) [15/15]

Also very nicely done

I know sometimes people hate the short notes, but if I don't really see much wrong I don't see a reason to draw it out too much. Overall the charts are really well done. I didn't notice any glaring mistakes, there may be a small one here or there that I missed, but very nicely done I enjoyed all the charts.

[Halogen-]

Judging Template

(T) Technique - sim author's skills in pattern manipulation
(S) Sync - offset, BPM shifts, no misrhythms (obvious errors)
(I) Interpretation/Expression - creativity and imagination in translating the music, evoking meaningfulness in the file
(E) Engagement - fun, replayable and shows no signs of dragging the player along
(F) Flow - matching scales/chord progression, proper structure to the file, good transitions


KEY:

T/S/I/E/F/(A) = Technique/Sync/Interpretation & Expression/Engagement/Flow/(Additional deductions/additions)
optional notes and not required changes
Serious errors.
Additional deductions.
Minimum acceptance: 12/15

Lata 90-te maszkor (Housekeeper)
-> sync is fine

Hard: 3/3/3/3/2/(0) [14/15]
- despite the heavy layering, this file flows really smoothly
- scratches are very well synced
- repetitive, but tastefully done in many spots, so it's not noticeable
- 40.857: pitch relevance is somewhat incorrect here, 41.757, 41.907, and 42.057 are three different notes - this happens a few times in this small section
- 120.057: not a fan of all jumps here, considering the fact that the song's dynamics considerably drop, so the jumps visually look erroneous

Medium: 3/3/3/3/2/(0) [14/15]
- toning the scratches down to 16ths was a really smart idea, really well done
- same PR issue as on Hard
- 200 BPM 16th streaming is a bit rough for Medium, but an appropriate difficulty drop compared to the jumpstreaming on Hard
- file plays very well; the unlayered feel gives players a chance to move quickly without having to fend off difficult layering

Easy: 3/3/2/3/3/(0) [14/15]
- 40.857: interesting subdivision of rhythms here
- 45.657 to 55.257: I like this a lot. Very clear what's being followed and the drastic change in chart makes sense with the song.
- 57.657: nice job catching the bass drum repeats on Easy, makes this stream a little more interesting
- 105.957: this jump looks misplaced.
- 110.307: gotta say, not a fan of this 8th note run, there's definitely more that could have been followed
- 120.057 to end: this is good, though.

Beginner: 3/3/2/3/2/(0) [13/15]
first tap: 4.857; last tap: 129.069; length: 124.212; taps: 170; NPS: 1.37

- falls within NPS threshold
- not sure what I think about those 8ths...
- 96.057: rhythm switch out of nowhere?
- not bad, otherwise.

[Housekeeper]

ok, fixed the pr in hard and med, and a few small changes in beginner, should be good to go now (o and fixed a jump in easy)

[Nocturne]

Judging Template

(T) Technique - sim author's skills in pattern manipulation
(S) Sync - offset, BPM shifts, no misrhythms (obvious errors)
(I) Interpretation/Expression - creativity and imagination in translating the music, evoking meaningfulness in the file
(E) Engagement - fun, replayable and shows no signs of dragging the player along
(F) Flow - matching scales/chord progression, proper structure to the file, good transitions


KEY:

T/S/I/E/F/(A) = Technique/Sync/Interpretation & Expression/Engagement/Flow/(Additional deductions/additions)
optional notes and not required changes
Serious errors.
Additional deductions.
Minimum acceptance: 12/15

{R} Lata 90-te maszkor (Housekeeper)
-> Sync: Perfect

Hard: 3/3/3/3/3/(0) [15/15]
-To be completely honest, I found almost nothing wrong with this, only points i would point out are that your layering is extremely well done and clever, but the song does start to get a little repetitive because of the drum pattern, despite this slight subjective "meh" about it, I loved the chart, it was pretty freakin cool man.

Medium: 2/3/3/3/3/(0) [14/15]
Scratches and glitches still felt incredible to play on medium, good job man! 45.657, I had a little problem with this 16th stream, only thing holding me back from deducting for it is that majority of player would find jumps to become a giant difficulty booster, and I can kind of justify how much easier normal stream is compared to jumpstream and the same BPM. I'll only take a little of for it, but at the same time, keeping it in was a ballsy move, I appreciate you looking out for people who enjoy fast streams and still allowing medium to experience that.

Easy: 3/3/2/3/3/(0) [14/15]
-12.661 missing 8th
-18.657, 23.457, 28.257 i also hear 8ths playing here, both on the bass kick and the synth.
Honestly, i actually liked the 8th runs, idky lol. The chart overall was pretty fun, it wasn't spectacular, but yeah I still enjoyed it, nice job.


Beginner: 3/3/3/3/2/(0) [14/15]
first tap: 4.857; last tap: 129.069; length: 124.212; taps: 170; NPS: 1.37

The 8ths were a little awkward, they fit, but I doubt a standard beginner player would understand how they do... Besides the 8ths, the rest of it was good man.

[Zero]

Hard

9.582 - missing 16th
14.457 ->>> Not sure how I feel about the chained hands, not my personal favorite
OVerall not a bad chart, nothing technically wrong with it - just not my cup of tea
35.457 - any reason this is not a jump?
[13/15]

Medium

9.582 - Hey look you didn't miss it in this one
14.457 ->>> Enjoyed this part much more
35.457 - same as previous
101.157 ->>> For this part it might be better to place jumps on 101.607 and other parts like it,
most of the song is step jumping, so adding some chains, or just more jumps would help liven it up
[14/15]

Easy

35.457 - single note for this sound please
[14/15]

Beginner

55.257 ->>> maybe some holds? (just make them short so the players doesnt have to hold the arrow while hitting the next step)
59.457 - 4th, just because your are matching with this atm
64.257 - same as above
90.057 - I would shorten this freeze, so it doesn't end where the next step is
91.257 ->>> For the 4th notes at 92.157 & 92.757, i would move them down to 8ths that way they match with the La's better
100.257 - same as "90.057"
124.869 - the file could use some jumps maybe instead of freeze arrows you can do Jumps or alternating Jumps, so Jump - step - Jump)
[13/15]

[Housekeeper]

Y U REVIEW DIS CHART IT IS ALREADY ACCEPTED ill make a few more changes again i guess ~_~

(btw i really appreciate all the reviews this is getting <3, gonna try to make this the best chart i can)

[Housekeeper]

lol i made a few tiny changes from shaun and dereks reviews, i really dont think this needs to be reviewed again, due to how small the changes were

*new file in the op*

edit, well uh apparently i cant manage attachments anymore lol

double edit, lol guess you cant upload your own files anymore sip

[Saphira]

New version is up.

[kisler]

File is now in game (5/16/2012 release).