Simfiler and TS Resident NaviSong Name: Planet of the Chunes
Artist Name: TR3YS3N (Koshiyokoshi on Thirdstyle.)
Permissions: Granted (user on Thirdstyle)
{R-2} Download here>>>{R-2} Planet of the Chunes(DJzAIKz).zip
{R-2} Stepcloud>>> Beginner | Easy | Medium | Hard
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READY FOR JOPNN ME
Last edited by Vote4DJz; 05-23-2012 at 12:08 AM.
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(T) Technique - sim author's skills in pattern manipulation
(S) Sync - offset, BPM shifts, no misrhythms (obvious errors)
(I) Interpretation/Expression - creativity and imagination in translating the music, evoking meaningfulness in the file
(E) Engagement - fun, replayable and shows no signs of dragging the player along
(F) Flow - matching scales/chord progression, proper structure to the file, good transitions
(A) Additional deductions
1st thing I have to ask, why did you choose to make the bpm 280 rather than 140?
Hard: 3/3/3/2/3/(0) [14/15]
You actually did a pretty nice job with this chart, I notice some relevance in the 8th runs.
12.678 to 13.642 - I love the freeze accents here
20.821 to 27.429 - Again really love the freeze accents.
There's really not too much to nitpick at with this chart, it has nice progression and I love the freeze accents you have throughout. I would strongly suggest making the bpm 140 rather than 280 though.
Medium: 2/3/2/2/3/(0) [12/15]
Beginning to 13.749 - The quarter note streaming is a bit bland.
12.678 to 13.642 - Why don't you have the accents here when you do them later in the song?
13.749 to 27.464 - Again pretty bland it's just tap jump, tap jump, over and over.
41.178 to 66.892 - It's just straight jumps for a little over 20 seconds.
46.642 - Forced minijack because of your jump placement.
This chart feels a little more like an easy chart than a medium to me. I know the hard chart isn't all that hard, but I really feel that this chart could have a little more difficulty to it. There's nothing really technically wrong with it, but I'd really like to see a little more to keep it interesting.
Easy: 3/3/2/2/3/(0) [13/15]
It's alright for an easy chart, again like with medium a bit bland in some sections.
Beginner: 2/3/2/2/3/(0) [12/15]
Super easy beginner chart, really not much to comment on.
Simfiler and TS Resident NaviEdited the OP with the Resubmission.
FIXEDOriginally Posted by Saphira
Last edited by Vote4DJz; 05-04-2012 at 09:56 PM.
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Simfiler and TS Resident NaviBut I don't know what OP means hahahahaha
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Simfiler and Freakin Graphics MasterOriginal Post[er] or Opening PostBut I don't know what OP means hahahahaha
the first post basically.
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Simfiler and TS Resident NaviJust review Shaun hahahahah lol jk
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looks so much better with the bpm fixed, thank you. Still accepts on all from me.
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SimfilerBeginner: Looks fine as a beginner chart to me.
- No comments
(Accept)
Easy: Looks fine overall.
-Only thing I could suggest to make this better is by improving the PR.
(Accept)
Medium: Looks fine overall.
- Missing a 16th note at beat 191.75 at the end of the song. You might have done that on purpose but I feel like it's weird not having a note there for this difficulty.
(Accept)
Hard: Really liked the hard chart but there were some things that bothered me.
- I felt the jump jack at the beginning of measure 38 was unnecessary and would like to see something else (like 1, 23, 14, 3, 14) instead of what you have (1, 23, 23, 4, 23).
- Another thing that bothered me was when you repeated some jumps 3 times. Examples of these are at beats 103.00 to 104.00, 119.00 to 120.00, and 151.00 to 152.00. I'd like it if you could vary the jumps in those spots.
- I think a few of the streams/trills at the end of the song could have better PR but it's good enough as it is right now.
(Accept)
First time for me to review a file here on TS so sorry if it's bad or not very detailed etc. Anyways, congrats on getting another chart accepted into TS since that makes two accepts total =3
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